If there was a window into me,
you would see the tracks of my tears,
the tears in my soul,
the cracks in my heart.
You would hear thoughts that are prayers,
and see that no matter my posture,
there are times my soul is on its knees.
You would see it, if you could see into me.
You would feel my yearning for love.
You would feel how badly I want to be wanted
for who I really am.
The beautiful & the ugly.
The truth, not the facade.
You would see my true intention,
to give love and receive love freely.
You would see I have no ulterior motive,
and you would never doubt me or question me.
You would know there is nothing I want but to love you.
If only you could see into me.
-Erika Fuego
Ah damn, this really touched me. I think you are a beautiful soul and that shows in your writings.
wow, thank you so much. That made my heart smiled.
I really appreciate in this how open you are with yourself, although you can feel the pain of how you search for something/someone that calls back to your heart’s cry. Truly beautiful poem, I love it.
Beautiful
Thank you ā¤
Love it..if only they could see into me š
<3!
“The beautiful & the ugly.
The truth, not the facade.”
No-one is perfect. We can be many things in a life. I believe we must do our best.
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Great post @Erika I Look forward to more of your posts… Awesome piece. ***If only the window exists***
Thanks so much. i think sometimes it can. You just have to get there.
I can’t agree… got a look at your videos too… the Adele song was great… you nailed it.
Thank you so much. i appreciate that. <3!
You are welcome @erika I look forward to more of your posts plus the videos too…
Regards; mayor5
Amen
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Doubt thou the stars are fire,
but never doubt I love.
Hamlet
The intensity in your poem reminded me of this.
beautiful. thank you.
How many love letters do you get every day from your followers? You write so beautifully you make them fall in love very day.
Thank you so much. I write them but don’t receive them š¦
It’s because we’re afraid of rejection from someone so amazing, with a heart inside to match the loveliness of the outside.
(I shall go and hide in a dark room now until the red face of embarrassment goes away.)
lol thank you so much. That is very sweet.
I would be honored if I could peer deeply into your soul. What a magnificent poem.
I would be honored if I had the opportunity to peer deeply into your soul. What a magnificent poem.
I would be honored to have the chance to peer into your soul deeply.
I am touched. Thank you very much.
This is beautiful, I will have to share this one with my husband. š