I want to sink into you & make your body my home.
You fit perfectly inside me, as if it were where you belong.
Two individual souls become one.
Our hearts beating fast & strong like drums.
I’m losing air, breathe your breaths into my lungs.
Kiss & touch me everywhere, part my thighs with your tongue.
The back board thumps louder and louder like the bass in a song.
Go harder and harder, as deep as you can, I can’t get enough.
Lift me up, throw me down.
Arch my back, turn me around.
Fill me up and leave me numb.
I come alive when we make love.
-Erika Fuego
New Beginnings 
best written poem about a relationship
Wow. Just wow…
Thank you ❤
Lovely.
Thank you ❤
Well done, very spot on. x] I like the part where it says, “You fit perfectly inside me, as if it were where you belong. – Two individual souls become one.” I’ve just been noticing that when two people make love facing each other that their chakras are alined with one another. So making love really does feel like that, two individual souls lining up, becoming one.
Exactly right ❤ Thank you for reading 🙂
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It’s getting really hot in here. So hot!
Wow! You definitely feel like my dream girl.
🙂 🙂 Thanks!
Hi my family member! I want to say that this post is awesome,
nice written and include almost all significant infos.
I’d like to look extra posts like this .
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Very sensual not really erotic. I love the Essence of this poem!!!
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I know you have heard this before but that was great. Very imiginative. Felt like I was right there.
🙂 Thank you.
Epic poem! Love it!
Thank you so much ❤
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A heartwarming piece! Written beautifully. ❤
Well, I am happy that you found my non-blog blog. Had you not, I wouldn’t have read this today. Loved it! Thank you!
🙂 Thank you so much!
You wrote it so purely yet in so beautiful manner.. the selection of words was beautiful and the poem was ..
well..
FANTASTIC!!
Much Love …
🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank you so much!
‘Hmm, is it me or is it HOT in here?’
its a little hot lol
your writings are super good for the genres you have chosen. you could write novels with the way you make words so sensual.
Wow, you made my heart sing with that comment. Thank you so much. Really, thank you. ❤
Wow, Erika! Awesome poem. I want to hear these words whispered in my ear. 🙂
😉 Thank you for reading ❤
I waited to comment, for lack of something truly insightful to say, but I think I got it now:
This piece is, put into words, what lovemaking should be, each and every time.
Too often, our schedules reduce the act to a mindless “quickie” before bed or between chores.
Our Society reduces (nay, “cheapens”) it to just another marketing tactic.
Our base, reptilian instinct reduces it to be simply about getting off.
But our creator endowed us to make it so much more, even if it happens to be a one-time thing with someone you’ve never met before, and may never see again.
Thank you for reminding us all of the true, deeper meaning within this beautiful act of Life and Love. Muy bien!
Thank you so much. I completely agree with all that you’ve said. i feel exactly the same way. Sex is the most euphoric, expressive, and loving act a human is capable of.
beautiful
Thank you ❤
Beautiful!
Thank you!
First, I’d like to thank you for liking my post and following my blog. Second, I really enjoyed reading your work. I love the passionate, and feral description, and how it can still be making love. I appreciate the honesty of all your writing.
Thank you so much for taking your time to read my work and comment. I appreciate your feed back.
Love,
Erika
Making love freely and longing for the dance again. Make life worth living. Always a pleasure to fall into your words.
🙂 Thank you my friend.
Wow. Beautiful piece. Thank you for the follow, by the way 🙂
Thank you and you are very welcome!
OMG! This is such a heartwarming piece. Kudos.\m/
– Rahul
Thank you ❤
This is a lovely piece of writing.
Thank you my friend.
“throw me down”…?…OUCH…u a maso-momma?
And all that thumping would be awfully distracting..takes the fun out of focus..lol 🙂
Fill me UP?..OMG..babies! PASS! 🙂
lol
My God! My heart is racing! I swear you remind me so much of myself that it is frightful!
I felt that one… Geez. That was so beautiful, baby girl!
xoxo,
Ava
🙂
Thank you so much. I told you we were very alike. Read one that I wrote called “Baker act” you’ll probably like that one a lot too. ❤
read “nothing” too. Tell me if you relate. Lets see if we have the same feelings.
Very good poem however there is a grammar error: “breathe your breaths.” not “breathe your breathes”. Apart from that, I cannot fault it.
Thank you!
You wrote it so purely yet in so beautiful manner.. the selection of words was beautiful and the poem was ..
well..
FANTASTIC!!
Much Love …
Wow. Fantastic.
Thank you.
This poem is perfect in so many ways. I wish I could have found the words the way that you did! xx
Thank you so much beautiful. <3!
Caliente Caliente Caliente!! :O
😉
I think we also go to another plane of consciousness and connection when we make love.
I believe so too.
Love this!! “I want to sink into you & make your body my home.” Great line!
Thank you ❤
Erika, there is an emotional intensity that words cannot fully express.
….Where two individual souls become one….
You are lost…
You are found…
You die…
You live again….
Love….
Absolutely.
Wow, Love it!
Thank you
You are a lot like me. We become entirely different people when we make love. Beautiful poem, Erika.
That is so true. I forget about everything. Its the ultimate high.
Definitely. It’s probably because without it we wouldn’t even exist.